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Invasion of the Pod People: Writing podcasts edition

April 20th 2017

I have found enlightenment and it’s all thanks to podcasts. Not, really. But I’m grateful for the medium. Folding laundry and doing dishes are no longer tedious tasks when I’m listening to My Favorite Murder or Pod Save America (those are my most fave). But I’m here today to talk about writing podcasts — those gems that dole out sage craft advice while you’re driving or walking the dog. If you’re not a podcast enthusiast, become one. It will change your life.

[These are in no particular order.]

Destination Mystery: The podcast, hosted and produced by Laura Brennan, is aimed at mystery readers, but writers can learn a thing or two from its impressive author guests. I particularly enjoyed Episode 40 with Jenny Milchman, a psychotherapist, who really understands the psychology of crime. Also, she sounds like a super cool person.

Grammar Girl Quick and Dirty Tips: These podcasts are less than 20 minutes and offer great grammar tips, which no writer, I don’t care who you are, can afford to pass up. Everything from weird idioms to abbreviations to AP Style is there, so comb through the archives and take notes.

The Writers Panel: If you’re a budding screenwriter, or want to be one, you need to listen to this podcast hosted by Ben Blacker. He interviews screenwriters from both TV and film and asks them questions about how they got their start in very competitive Hollywood, and how they develop story. I wish I could go back in time and tell my 22-year-old self to move to LA and make a go of screenwriting, but I can’t. Instead, I listen to this podcast, and learn about a different form of storytelling.

DIY MFA Radio: Gabriela Pereira, who has an MFA of her own, hosts and produces this podcast. Her website has a slew of resources for writers, but her podcasts are where she interviews authors to gain insight into their process. Again, another great place to learn from the experts. Get a reality check about writing and money in Episode 129 with Manjula Martin (who I had the pleasure of meeting at an event in my town), or understand the agent/author relationship with literary agent Mitch Hoffman in Episode 126 (I found this super informative).

The Creative Penn Podcast: Joanna Penn, the very successful self-published thriller author, graciously shares her insights and expertise about self-publishing. Her guests are always thoughtful and interesting. There’s a lot here for traditionally published authors too — tips for marketing, and help with craft. You must check out Episode 294 where she interviews Lisa Cron, author of Story Genius. I swear by that book. Joanna is super prolific — there’s a wealth of resources here, so dig in, and go nuts.

First Draft with Sarah Enni: Holy crap, I just discovered this now! I’m listening to the episode with Sara Zarr right this minute, but there are a ton of YA and MG authors who’ve been interviewed. I’m excited to get started.

Do you have a podcast suggestion for me? Please comment belooooooooow.

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What I’m watching: Eyewitness on USA

October 23rd 2016

Let’s be honest, I have been a real shitty blogger lately. I blame part of that on the fact that I blog for two great group sites (Across the Board & Mysteristas) and all my good blogging topics go to them. The other part, well, I get lazy. I’d rather be watching TV than writing a blog post. I’d rather be watching TV than doing almost anything. Because I freaking love TV. Is it not the golden age of television right now? I credit Netflix, Amazon, and Hulu for forcing the cable networks to step up their game.

Because even TBS, TNT, and now USA are putting out really great shows. I remember, once upon a time, there was no cursing or sex on basic cable. Now, Samantha Bee is dropping asshole and bullshit on Full Frontal, although still no fucks. Maybe in a few years.

PSA: Watch Animal Kingdom on TNT. It’s a John Wells show (same guy responsible for Shameless, ER, Southland). It’s fucking amazing. It’s about a crime family in Southern California led by a manipulative, incestuous matriarch. I can’t wait for Season 2.

Which brings me to today’s topic: Eyewitness on USA Networks. It’s a 10-episode series, based off a Norwegian show, about two teen boys who witness a crime in a sleepy, Upstate New York town. You can stream the first episode on USA’s website and watch the rest on the cable channel on Sunday nights. (I’m DVRing the show.) Catherine Hardwicke, who you might know from directing Twilight, directed a few of the episodes. And you can tell because the show has those muted, dark colors like the movie. Even the woodsy Hudson River valley has a similar vibe to the Pacific Northwest. It’s all very atmospheric for a crime drama.

For me, the best part of the series is the romantic relationship between the two boys because I am currently writing a YA mystery featuring two gay leads. In the show, Philip is openly gay and Lukas is not. This poses a problem when the boys, who were making out in a secluded cabin, witness a murder. Lukas is fearful he’ll be found out while Philip is struggling to hide what he knows from his foster mom, who is also the town sheriff.

Anyway, watch it, love it. Thank me later.

What are you watching?

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A deleted scene from my WIP

July 17th 2016

Since I write for two group blogs, Across the Board, and Mysteristas, I find I have little content left for my own blog. So I thought, why not post some deleted scenes from my work-in-progress. This is a scene I wrote as an opening to the novel, but my CP read it and felt it didn’t work. It’s not a bad piece of writing and I wanted to share it. Don’t mind the formatting. I copied and pasted it from Scrivener.

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1995
Troy Byrne floated on a raft in the center of the in-ground pool and thought, Fuck, school starts soon. The fingers of his right hand grazed the top of the warm water while his left hand clutched a beer, an expensive IPA from Belgium, at least that’s what his stepdad said before handing it to him.Troy lazed in the float, stopping every few moments to adjust his sunglasses or steer himself away from the edge. It was the Thursday before Labor Day. The sun was blazing hot, the sky slightly overcast. His stepfather, Jerry Concord, lay on a chaise lounge, barking directions to one of his underlings into the cordless phone, while his mom, Natalia Concord nee Byrne nee Diaz, could be heard blending margaritas in the outdoor kitchen, drowning out the stereo which was playing Troy’s new Radiohead CD.
This was a far cry from his childhood summers in the Poconos which were more about exploring the woods outside their tiny rental while trying to avoid Mrs. Crutchen, the cantankerous babysitter. He and his sister, Miranda, splashed in waterfalls or caught minnows in the pond. Somehow those simple things managed to fill up a whole summer. Not like now where time dragged on, while Troy waited for his life to begin.
A shadow blocked Troy’s sun and he lifted up one end of his Ray-Bans to investigate. His neighbor, Amanda, clad in a pink bikini, a towel draped over her tan shoulder, smiled brightly. “Your mom invited me over, hope it’s cool.”
Troy dazzled her with his thousand-watt smile and said, “Sure. The water’s warm.” He dropped his sunglasses back into place. He heard Amanda’s lithe body glide into the water.
Troy’s mom now stood over the water holding a tray with two margaritas, as if she was still working as a waitress, and presented them to Troy and Amanda. Troy pressed the beer bottle to his lips as an answer. Amanda graciously swam over and accepted the drink.
Some parents walked a thin line between being their kids’ friend and being responsible guardians. Not Troy’s who were permissive to the point of embarrassment. Like now. He shot a look at Amanda, but she had set her glass on the expensive paving stone, and was diving under the water, her blonde hair trailing her like a mermaid. She didn’t seem to mind one bit.
“Your parents are so cool,” she’d said to him over half a dozen times either outside his locker or in English class or at Jerry’s country club. Amanda talked to Troy a lot. “Yeah,” he’d respond absently. He loved his mom and Jerry, but they were far from perfect people.
The raft wobbled and Troy turned his head to see Amanda break the surface on the other side of him. She wiped the water from her eyes and said, “A group of us are going down the shore this weekend. You in?”
“You should go, querido,” his mother said in her accented English.
Jerry had hung up the phone and made his way to the steps, stopping first to adjust the waistband on his bright blue swim trunks. “What’s this now?”
Amanda smiled, suddenly sheepish. “I was telling Troy a bunch of us are going to Point Pleasant.”
Jerry glided across the top of the water, his gray hair like a silver bullet. “One last hurrah before senior year.” His voice was full of nostalgia. “I remember those days.”
Troy noticed his mother remained silent. Probably because her high school years were interrupted by violence and kidnappings in Nicaragua. Maybe that’s why she let him get away with so much. Her gift to her American-born son was a life without hardship. But no one had that life.
“Yeah, one last chance to have fun before the real work begins,” Amanda said.
Jerry playfully smacked Troy’s bicep with a wet hand. “Not our Troy. The kid gets As without even cracking a book.”
Troy winced. Academics came easy for Troy. It was the rest of life that had him stumped.
“Don’t be embarrassed, son,” said Jerry. “Colleges will be begging you to apply.”
Troy wasn’t so sure about that. He had some blemishes on his record, well one very large blemish in particular. Jerry never brought it up, but he had to remember.
Troy paddled himself over to the steps in the deep end and swiftly maneauvered from the float to the ladder while still holding onto his now empty beer bottle.
“Getting out?” Amanda said, clearly disappointed.
He smiled and wagged the bottle. “Need another.”
Troy made his way over to the tiny fridge tucked under the countertop. The outdoor kitchen had been Jerry’s idea. “This way your mother isn’t always in the house when we’re outside,” he’d said to Troy. Troy wasn’t sure if his mother appreciated that consideration quite the way Jerry had suspected she would.
Troy grabbed a beer, this time a cheap brand Jerry stocked for unfussy guests, and popped the top on the bottle opener attached to the deck. The backyard was an oasis, even by the standards in their wealthy Philly suburb. Jerry didn’t like to travel much, so to appease his new wife and son, he turned his expansive backyard into a personal resort. Troy could not complain, but his sister would’ve hated this.
His mother reappeared, this time dressed in a black sarong tied around her slim waist. She had walked to the mailbox, a sixty-second chore that gave his mom hours of pleasure for she reveled in the jealous stares of her uppity white neighbors.
“You got something,” she said as she handed him a glossy white rectangle.
Troy took a swig of his beer and then examined the postcard. It was rare for him to get mail. When he and Miranda had been kids, they used to get envelopes covered in funny stamps and filled with letters they couldn’t read in weird Spanish cursive. Now, the only time he got mail was when his high school sent something, which wasn’t that often, and never good.
Troy situated himself on the barstool next to the outdoor sink and repeatedly flipped over the postcard trying to make sense of who sent it and why. On the front was the intricate black gate of the Coshosh Community College, and the college’s motto, “We grow success.” Troy always thought it was a bizarre metaphor, as if kids were crops. Yeah, cash crops. But on the back, where normally someone would write a jaunty paragraph about their vacation, or in this case, summer classes at CCC, someone had sketched a tree stump and written a date in Spanish. Was this for his mother? Troy double-checked. Nope, his name was on it.
What the hell?
Then his breath hitched. He set his beer on the counter and traced his damp finger over the drawing of the tree stump.
When he and Miranda were kids, their mother, on her days off, would take the kids to Herman’s Rock, which wasn’t so much a rock as a clearing on top of a steep hill outlined in trees. There, they’d lay out a big blanket, eat a picnic lunch of sandwiches, gallo pinto, and fruit, and he and Miranda would play tag or, if the wind was right, fly kites. There was a hollowed out tree stump and the kids would leave trinkets under the moss to retrieve when they returned.
God, Troy missed his sister. He hadn’t seen Miranda in two years, not since she took off after high school graduation with nothing more than her clothes and some cash she had earned at a part-time job. Miranda loathed Jerry’s money. She said his wealth changed their family for the worse, but Troy couldn’t agree. Jerry’s money meant Troy didn’t have to work too hard or think too hard and he was grateful for it.
He hadn’t heard from her in two years either. No email. No phone calls. No letters. Well, except for this one.
The whole postcard was cryptic. The drawing, he understood. It was symbolic of an important place known only to them. But why the Spanish date? It’s not like their mother couldn’t read it. Also, Spanish months were cognates, any idiot could translate them.
1 de septiembre, 1995.
September 1, 1995.
Tomorrow’s date.
She didn’t specify a time, but based on the crude sun she drew high in the sky, he figured about noon.
Herman’s Rock was a three-hour drive from the house. One way. He could take his Acura, be home by dinner.
It was one thing when Troy’s real father left them. Troy was a toddler, he could barely recall the man’s face, let alone if he was a loving dad. (He wasn’t.) But his sister leaving him left a much larger hole in him than he cared to admit. And it came shortly after he’d been hurt by another person. Troy had spent the last two years cultivating his devil may care demeanor. It suited him well, but it was a false bravado. Troy worried. He worried a lot.
“Hey, Troy.” Amanda swam up to the edge of the pool and hoisted herself out slightly so that her breasts practically rested upon the concrete, giving Troy a perfect line of sight to her cleavage. “Are you gonna come with us tomorrow or what?”
Troy admired her courage, but he didn’t feel bad he was going to crush it.
“I can’t.” He wouldn’t tell his parents about the postcard. They’d just ask too many questions or, worse, they wouldn’t care. “I made other plans.”

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A passion project

May 30th 2016

For the past two weeks, I’ve been working on a new YA mystery. A passion project (PP) with the working title of Solitary Boys. It’s about two estranged teen boys who becomes allies in solving the mystery of a girl’s disappearance. I actually stopped working on another book because I was so inspired by this story, I didn’t want to wait to get started. My original plan was to do Solitary Boys just until May 31st and then get back to the other book in June, in time to get it to my editor in July. But that’s been derailed. I’m going to continue working on Solitary Boys because I can’t not work on it. It’s re-energized my writing, given my deflating ego a much needed lift, and it’s so fun to write.

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And get this — I didn’t outline the book. I outline all my projects, otherwise I screw up the story. But, with this, I decided to write scenes as I think of them, out of order. (I know the ending. I always know how my stories end.) I’m consumed by this story now. To the point, my husband is all cranky because I’m writing at night and not hanging out with him. *shrug* I write during the day, but it’s not enough. I’m going to end this post now, so I can get back to my work. It’s 8:32pm. If I hustle, I can get in another thousand words before bed.

And here’s the opening paragraph from the WIP. Enjoy!

Troy Byrne fishtailed the ’92 Acura NSX onto the gravel drive, kicking up gray shale and dust. His stepfather probably would’ve had an aneurysm seeing how Troy handled the sports car if he hadn’t stopped caring about the vehicle a few years ago. The novelty of dropping seventy grand on a car lost its luster quickly for men of Jerry’s tax bracket. “They make them with CD players now,” Jerry had said before handing Troy the registration and insurance card.

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YA Scavenger Hunt 2016

March 29th 2016

What up, y’all. Or yous guys. I’m Kimberly G. Giarratano (my author friends call me KGG) and I’m a YA mystery writer. I’m participating in the Spring 2016 YA Scavenger Hunt. I’m on Team GREEN — the perfect color for spring. YA_ScavengerHunt_ColourLogo_CMYK-01

This bi-annual event was first organized by author Colleen Houck as a way to give readers a chance to gain access to exclusive bonus material from their favorite authors…and a chance to win some awesome prizes! At this hunt, you not only get access to exclusive content from each author, you also get a clue for the hunt. Add up the clues, and you can enter for our prize–one lucky winner will receive one book from each author on the hunt in my team! 

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This year there are 9 teams of 20 authors! Lots of goodies going around.

I’ve hidden my favorite number in this post in GREEN and I’m doing my own special, separate giveaway. Check out the Gleam widget in the post.

 


I’m delighted to host Tanya Lisle!

Tanya’s bonus content is a deleted scene! Always fun. Some of my best writing are scenes that didn’t make it into the book. I bet I have over 14 (wink wink) deleted scenes in various folders.

Tanya Lisle
Tanya Lisle is a novelist from Vancouver, British Columbia. Publishing several novels annually, she writes in a variety of genres from young adult urban fantasy to post-apocalyptic science fiction. When she isn’t writing, she is either working as a web developer or working on a variety of game projects.

Find out more information by checking out her website or find more about the author’s book in the following places:

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White Noise
After an unusual day at school of mute goth kids, disappearing acid burns and the feeling of someone hunting for him, Max just wants to unwind at home. When a stranger appears in his room and abducts him, he witnesses the murder of his parents and becomes the prime suspect.

Max soon finds himself on the run with several other abducted teens, all being hunted down because they’ve developed unnatural powers. Even with his new allies and new found ability to heal, Max can’t get too comfortable. He knows that the people looking for him are still out there – and they’re closing in.

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Running. She had to keep running.

Jaime’s feet pounded against the cobblestone streets and she wove through the sparse Thursday evening crowd, many of them looking angrily around unable to figure out what had just brushed past them. Jaime knew none of them could see her, at least, and none of them did more than look around for a moment before going about their own business.

It would have been infuriating if she wasn’t terrified. None of them knew she was there, so how did he? Who was he? This strange boy that could see her and was now chasing her down, he shouldn’t be able to see her either. But he moved too fast, vanishing from one spot and appearing in front of her a moment later.

The first time Jaime saw him, he was with others. There were five of them in total, all looking at one another angrily and saying nothing. They would gesture now and then, but it wasn’t until one of them caught on fire that she realized just how wrong they were. That, and when this one looked directly at her.

That boy was ahead of her again, turning a corner ahead, ready to try to grab her again. Jaime took a hard left into the nearest door she could find. She’d been running for what felt like days now and it had done nothing to throw him off, so it was time to try another tactic. Hiding in sight. People saw him and not her, after all.

She walked into a restaurant, the door closing behind her. The smell of beef broth permeated the air of the small pho restaurant, little more than a hole in the wall with very limited places for anyone to sit. The dinner rush had not begun yet, though it was already beginning to fill.

Jaime took a seat at one of the tables, trying her best to blend in while trying to catch her breath. She put her head down on the table, gulping down air and the smell of food around her as people chittered on in a mix of languages she couldn’t quite make out. Her stomach grumbled, starving from the run and the fear, but she didn’t dare take anything and draw attention to herself. Not yet.

She finally looked up and jumped, seeing the boy now sitting across from her. She looked around wildly, but it seemed that no one else even batted an eye that this boy was there. The woman behind the counter looked at him and frowned, her fingers lingering over the menu and debating whether she wanted to bring it to the table. He didn’t notice, his eyes on Jaime alone and a careful smile across his chapped lips.

Jaime tried to get up, already on her toes under the table and ready to run, but it felt like something was holding her down in place. She felt like she was running again, her heart pounding in her chest and her breathing becoming difficult.

Was he doing this? It had to be him. There was no one else who could possibly be doing this. But he wasn’t even looking at her when he did it, his eyes looking around everywhere in front of him and trying to figure out where she was.

But if he couldn’t see her, then how?

It was impulse that made her decide to become visible again. She thought about screaming and causing a scene, to bring the other people in the place to her aid. Really, though, she was tired from running and she wanted to know who this boy who’d been chasing her down even was.

His eyes lit up at the sight of her. Good to see you, his fingers said as they moved. The movements were clumsy and confused, but Jaime understood what he meant by them. Sign language. It was… sign language?

The fear was rapidly being replaced with curiosity as she looked at him. He was hopeful as he tried to move his hands, though it was clear that his hands were not quite moving as he wanted them to.

“Who are you?” she asked out loud, her hands moving to match her words.

Luke, he said. Nice to meet you.


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